05-24-2010
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Grand Excavator of the Poop Mines; Sovereign of Soiled Nappies Prognosticator of prognosticators
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Gender: Male
Location: Far over the Misty Mountains cold...
Blurb: Married father of two, sci-fi author
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Originally Posted by Underling
You forgot the punchline. Or... maybe the bit before the punchline, what is that even called... Anyway, it's a few sandwiches short of a joke. Frankly, I'm not convinced you've fully grasped how to convert your humour from the spoken to the written word.
Not saying it won't be good, I'm well aware that I should wait until it gets going, especially if it's a plot driven kind of thing. I'm just compensating for the fact I'm going to have to sit here watching everyone comment on what an 'epic win' the emperor's new bell-bottoms are before he's even out the front door.
Looks nice enough for a webcomic, though. Good luck.
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Seconded
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